THEATRE CLASS TODAY. opinions?

was the awesomeness. 
when i act, i’m completely dramatic. (when i need to be.)
we had to create a scene using “special movements” including: punching, carrying dead bodies, kissing, slapping, shooting, stabbing, etc. (only needed to use 3)
my idea was that a wife who cheated on her husband was caught, then he threatened to file divorce. the husband slaps the wife, then she picks up a gun and goes “PROMISE ME… THAT WE CAN… GO BACK… ACT LIKE NONE OF THIS EVER HAPPENED! PROMISE ME. NOW. OR I WILL SHOOT.”
the husband then yells out “STOP! in the name of love!” but then stabs her in self defense, with her dying. 
then the cops bust in, one being lazy and the other being over dramatic the lazy one is like “hey uh boss, do we have to go, eh?” and the husband is caught with the knife in his hand. the dramatic boss goes (in an Arnold Schwazenager accent) “STOP RIGHT THERE. PUT YOU HANDS IN THE AIR, FOOL!”
and they arrest him, and they carry my body off stage.



what do you guys think? my group likes it. so an extra opinion? 

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